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In This Issue
Editor’s Corner
A word from WITS owner Yvonne Perry
The Art and Craft of Writing
by Dr. Marlene Caroselli
WITS Podcast Schedule
Writing Across the Curriculum
by Elysabeth Eldering
Network With Us
The Writing Life: A Word Game
by JJ Murphy
Book With a View
Read this month’s book reviews
Using “I” As a Conceit by C. Howard-Johnson
Writing Folktales by Karen Pierce Gonzalez
Poetry Corner
Poems from our readers
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editor’s Corner
by Yvonne Perry
Welcome to spring and another issue of Writers in the Sky Newsletter/E-zine. Some folks ask why this publication is called both a newsletter and an e-zine. Well, it’s really too long to be a newsletter, and it isn’t laid out as a magazine; however, it has characteristics of both. It’s delivered electronically, it has news, articles, and announcements from our readers, and it has its own place on the Web (http://writersinthesky.blogspot.com). So, it’s both an e-zine and a newsletter. What do you think of the idea of changing the name to Writers in the Sky News-zine?
While I’m changing things, I might mention that this column, which was called Author’s Corner, is now called Editor’s Corner. While I am both an author and an editor, most magazines and newsletter have an editor in charge of publication, so I’m catching up with the times and christening this new name. Champagne, please!
As spring is budding so are my four pregnant daughters! The first baby is due by C-section on April 10. Please keep Katie and her baby boy in your thoughts and prayers as she is a high-risk case due to health concerns. I’m making quilts for each grandbaby and you can see photos of my handiwork here:
Turtle for Katie and Jackson’s boy
Sock Monkey for Liam Owen
Transportation theme for Jonas Finn
I have two more to go: one for Ryah and Fred’s baby due in October, and one for Sarah and Nathan’s baby due in September.
WITS has been busy with a lot of great new and returning clients and I have personally been doing interviews. I’m especially thankful for Book Marketing Maven Dana Lynn Smith and the Q&A she posted on her blog. It’s all about authors working with editors, and I think you will find it informative and beneficial—especially if you are trying to decide whether or not your book should be edited before going to print.
On that same thought, I have written an article about the literacy rate being affected by authors who send poorly-written material to be published where it will be read by the public market. I’m not talking about a few typos; everyone makes mistakes. I’m referring to material that is below an acceptable level when it comes to grammar, spelling, punctuation, and overall development. I certainly intend no hard feelings to my POD friends, but in the article, I have given everyone something to think about. Feedback is welcome.
That leads me to introduce my POD friend, Tracy Lucas, who is the editor at Published by Westview. Tracy believes in publishing quality books at a reasonable price and getting them into mainstream circulation through Ingram. Tracy is also a columnist (Writing Careers) for the Nashville Examiner and she interviewed me about WITS. You may read the article here: http://www.examiner.com/.
Speaking of partnerships, Irene Watson and I have been in strategic alliance and have networked on several projects for the past three years. Irene’s company Reader Views hosts an annual Literary Awards event for which WITS is a sponsor. The 2008 winner of WITS’ $100 cash prize for best creative writing is James Earle McCracken for his book general fiction book, Rue de la Pompe: A Satiric Urban Fantasy (ISBN 9780595485055). Three WITS clients: Carl David, author of Bader Field (Nightengale Press); Dawn Menge, author of Queen Vernita’s Visitors (Outskirts Press); and Linda Ballou Wai-nani: High Chiefess of Hawai’i (Star Publish), won honorable mention in Reader Views Literary Awards this season.
Another strategic alliance I want to mention is our affiliation with Full Circle Admin. Owner Mindy Schwartz is able to assist clients with administrative needs such as calendar management, data entry, Excel spreadsheets, job search services, letter writing, typing, and transcribing. Other specialties include: coaching and mentoring to set up and maintain a high-traffic and sales-effective blog; stock, event, and product photography; link building; SEO writing; social networking and creating/posting trailers for books and businesses. Mindy and Sarah Moore work together as part of the WITS to give authors excellent customer service and a strong online presence.
Lately, clients have been coming to me asking me to serve as their writing mentor or developmental editor. I am delighted to be working with six writers on an hourly basis. Whenever one gets an article or chapter completed and is ready for me to look over it, I am able to offer a constructive critique either by phone or email about how to improve the piece. I would be glad to help you, too! You can hire me to work as few or as many hours per month as you wish, so why not invest in yourself and improve your writing skills with personalized instruction?
I’m co-writing a book with an author who needs teen or adult children of military parents to take her survey about being raised in a military family. Typical questions include: How many times did you move as a child of military parents? Did you live on a military base as a child? What was the highest rank achieved? Were you/your parent injured in conflict? If your parent was in the armed services, or if you are a parent serving in any branch of the military for any country, please go to http://tr.im/gA79 and answer a few questions. Thank you for helping provide stories for this book.
With all the attention in the media about stem cell research, it’s time for the average citizen to understand more about it. Why not read my blog? www.Right2Recover.com
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The Art and Craft of Writing
by Dr. Marlene Caroselli
The Craft
For every writer, there are two prisms through which writing our words will be viewed. Readers expect us to be craftsneb. They trust we will have a fundamental grasp of the elements that constitute good writing. Researchers, for example, have found that sentences exceeding the ratio of one preposition for every eleven words are poorly written. They sound first-grade-ish. (”Syntactically immature” is what the experts call such writing.) The reader cannot flow through the sentence without encountering a verbal hiccup every few words.
Researchers have also found that sentences that contain more than fifteen words cause the reader to go back and read the sentence again to be sure they have understood the meaning. Think about it—some of the most persuasive sentences of our time are short: “Just do it!” “Yes, we can!” “It’s the economy, silly!”
Additionally, the successful writer knows her craft so well that grammatical errors don’t appear in it. Nor do clumsy phrases or a limited vocabulary.
But the successful writer knows both the technical matter and the techniques, has knowledge of the content, but can also place it in the right context, has a message and can find the perfect medium in which to place it. That’s where the art of writing comes into play.
The Art
Our language has a million words, and is growing daily. Contrast that number to the number of words in the native tongue of Arubans. Papiamento has only 500 words. We English speakers have so many choices with which to hook our readers. We have infinite combinations that can intrigue our fiction readers and persuade our non-fiction readers.
Your artistry is even more important when you are sending out query letters. After all, if you can’t persuade an editor to read your letter, let alone buy your submission, your readers will never get the chance to enjoy your artistry. Here are some Dos and Don’ts to consider before you send off your inquiry.
DO:
Regard life as an experiment. Write that cover letter in three different ways and solicit input as to which is most effective.
Use audience awareness to convince your reader. Consider what elements will be most appealing to your various readers. Use words that matter to them.
Remove barriers that may stand between you and others. One barrier might be your unfamiliarity with the publication in which you want to be featured. Spend some time learning about its uniqueness. Another barrier might be the editor’s “I’ve-heard-it-all-before” syndrome. Find ways to truly stand out from your competition.
DON’T:
Confuse persuasion with manipulation. Your efforts should yield mutually beneficial purposes.
Forget to consider the editor’s position. Editors are busy people. Make your query letters worthy of their time.
Neglect the questions that might arise in the editor’s head. Have answers incorporated within your query.
Your Love, Your Life, Your Lexicon
I often tell audiences I would rather write than do anything else in the world. (This may explain why I haven’t had a date since 1985!) If your passion matches mine, you are no doubt eager to expand your persuasive communications. Contact me about an e-book (Principled Persuasion) that will make your verbal expansion a pleasurable pursuit.
Dr. Marlene Caroselli (mccpd@frontiernet.net) is an author, keynoter, and corporate trainer. You can learn more about her via Google.
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Podcast
Listening to Writers in the Sky Podcast on a computer is easy. Just click this link: http://yvonneperry.blogspot.com and go to my blog. On the right sidebar there is a list of archived shows. Click on the interview you would like to hear and it will open a post that has a link to open the audio file. For information about being a guest on Writers in the Sky Podcast, see www.writersinthesky.com/writing-podcast.htm
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April 3
Sarah Moore will be interviewing Jeff Roberts about his new book titled Little Stories, a collection of short stories written during Jeff’s days as an undergraduate at the University of Iowa. The author will be discussing the inspiration he used to capture such raw emotion, his decision to place his student work into a published collection, and why he enjoys the short story format. See Outskirts Press to learn more about Jeff Roberts and Little Stories.
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April 10
Jay Greenfeld will be discussing his new book, My Choice, My Life, which shares methods readers can use to develop a greater sense of balance in key areas of their lives. The content is geared primarily towards a younger audience, with topics such as choosing healthy relationships, making smart decisions concerning alcohol and drugs, and succeeding in school or at that first job. Instead of providing a set of absolute answers, Greenfeld encourages readers to reflect on their individual situations and use his advice as a springboard to determine solutions that make sense for them. Purchase on Amazon.
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April 17
Storyheart talks about his new release, Across the Pond, a story about the innocence and excitement accompanies first loves. When teenager Fred Squire is sent by his parents to visit family friends in America, he never imagined that he would meet the girl of his dreams in the very house in which he was staying. Storyheart allows their romance to unfold with a refreshing level of appropriateness for the age of his characters, but always in a way that is respectful of their genuine emotions. He has fun playing up the cultural and language differences. Purchase on Amazon.
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April 24
M. Carol Coffey author discusses her new novel, Zoe Lucky and the Green Gables Mystery. The young heroine of this book has recently moved into a new apartment complex where frightening events keep occurring. She uses strong will and determination to pull together clues in her surroundings and bring the lurking criminals to justice. Coffey uses her love of animals and personal affiliation with organizations that educate about birds to integrate the winged creatures into her plotline. Purchase at Outskirts Press.
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Writing Across the Curriculum, Creating Teacher’s Guides…
to Turn a One-subject-related Book into a Multi-curricula Teaching Aid for Supplementing All Subjects
by Elysabeth Eldering
Do you have a topic that is or can be used in the classroom to supplement a specific course of study? If so, how do you get that one topic to be multi-faceted and reach more than one subject? Teacher’s guides. It may take a bit of research to get to the point of being cross curriculum, but it can be done.
My series, the Junior Geography Detective Squad (JGDS) 50-state, mystery, trivia series, is just that. Although my initial intentions were to supplement 4th and 5th grade social studies classes by creating a story that gives the readers more information about the states they never really learned in the classroom, I found that when writing the teacher’s guides, I went beyond the social studies curriculum and ended up including science, arts and English Language Arts (ELA).
The teacher’s guides don’t have to be long to cover a lot of ground. For example, mine are about thirteen pages long and that is with the cover, copyright page, index, and bibliography. So how did I get from just a social studies supplement to include arts, ELA and science in such few pages? Easy. I added discussion/research questions all taken from some of the more historical clues and expanded them out so that the students will actually have to do a little bit of work and write a report or work in groups to come with a display or other creative item on the project. ELA is all about researching, writing, and reporting. This also adds the creative outlet for art projects. Next, I found that one of my clues actually has a science experiment that is widely used in schools across the United States. So, that clue became a science experiment with an explanation of how the experiment works. For fun, I added a puzzle and an end-of-book quiz that can be used for extra credit or can be graded as part of the curriculum. By doing these steps, I have just created a short, across the curriculum teacher’s guide.
If you have a topic that can be used in the classrooms and think you are only able to reach one course of study, think about a teacher’s guide to supplement the book. See how many subjects you can cover with a short, simple teacher’s guide.
With a childhood spent traveling the globe, it’s no wonder that writer Elysabeth Eldering has a passion for geography! Growing up in a military family, Elysabeth lived in Japan, Germany, New York, Kentucky, and Texas before her family finally settled in a small town in South Carolina. Elysabeth, who lives in Honea Path, SC, has put her globetrotting skills to work in the Junior Geography Detective Squad’s 50-state mystery trivia series. Published by 4RV Publishing, the series made its debut in summer 2008 with State of Wilderness. The Junior Geography Detective Squad will continue to put their mystery-solving talents to work in each state to challenge young readers on their knowledge of the nation’s geography and interesting facts. State of Quarries is next in the line-up. For more info contact Elysabeth at eeldering@gmail.com and check out her blog - http://jgdsseries.blogspot.com
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Network With Us
Add your announcement or brag about your writing accomplishment. Tell us about your book or business.
Share information and ideas or send articles or advertorial for the next issue by contacting us on our Web site www.writersinthesky.com/contact.php . Here are some announcements from our readers this month:
Creative (Right-Brain) People Can Attain their Goals!
Have you ever wondered how creative people attain success—and not only in their artistic field, but in other areas of their lives as well?
So many writers struggle with attaining goals, even after you’ve taken the time to list them, break them into actions, and set completion dates. You get frustrated with yourself, which powers your negative internal voice, which only leads to less motivation and more failure.
The UPositive Guide to Goal Attainment for Creative People leads you, step by step, through a system for success with writing. It can also be applied to other areas of your life.
The main problem for writers and other creative people in goal attainment is that most of the process of setting, tracking, and timing goals is left-brain (logical), while you’re spending your time using the right brain (creative, emotional, etc.).
According to author Batya D. Wininger, LCSW, MSW, KAP, Rev., the best way for you to attain writing goals is to use both sides of your brain, trading off activities that lead to goal attainment. She explains that even though the right and left hemispheres of your brain have different jobs to do, they actually communicate with each other!
Through The UPositive Guide to Goal Attainment for Creative People, you’ll learn how to have your right brain guide your left brain in setting up winning activities for the right brain to accomplish! Sounds like a see-saw? That’s exactly right!
With easy-to-understand exercises, step-by-step directions, and plenty of encouragement, you’ll be re-inspired to work toward your dreams, creative and otherwise; you’ll know exactly what next steps you need to take; you’ll be able and ready to take them; and you’ll succeed quicker and easier than you ever imagined.
For more information, or to order the eBook, go to: http://www.upositive.com.
After ordering the eBook, email Batya@UPositive.com. Let her know about your order and that you read this article through Writers in the Sky. You’ll receive a special, free workbook to accompany The UPositive Guide to Goal Attainment for Creative People.
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Pamme Boutselis recently joined the management team of a brand new poetry Web site, and invites writers to check out www.poetsphere.org.
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Friday, March 6, Steve Ouch may have made Twistory (Twitter History) by selling 200 copies of SteamPotVille, enough to reach #208 in Amazon’s ranking system, just behind one of Rick Steves’ travel books. What inspired the push? Steve’s banker had promised him a book tour loan if he could sell 200 copies today. So that’s just what he did.
SteamPotVille is at the heart of the eclectic and magical world, with its costumed animals and bright swirling landscapes. Preparing for his publishing debut in May, Steve used March 6 to get the word out. He remained on Twitter for fifteen hours and made hundreds of posts pushing his book. With over 10,000 followers, he only needed 2 percent of them to buy. And they did. He Tweeted when someone made a purchase and promoted that person. He excerpted lines from the book. Suggested adults would love it as much as kids. Offered it as a St. Patrick’s Day gift idea. There wasn’t a sales angle he missed.
If you want to learn something about marketing and self-promotion, follow Steve Ouch on Twitter. Or feel free to ask him, he’s always accessible.
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Frankie, the partially-paralyzed dachshund of author Barbara Techel, was inducted into the Wisconsin Pet Hall of Fame on February 28, 2009. Barbara wrote Frankie’s story, Frankie, the Walk ‘N Roll Dog after realizing the powerful lessons Frankie taught her about overcoming challenges. Frankie was recognized for bringing a positive face to all animals with disabilities and proving that they can live a happy, fulfilling life if given the chance.
Frankie continues to share her upbeat message by visiting areas schools, nursing homes, hospice and hospitals. For more information, or to watch Frankie’s inspirational video visit www.joyfulpaws.com. Kids will especially enjoy www.frankiethewalknrolldog.blogspot.com.
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Author Fiona Ingram has just completed The Secret of the Sacred Scarab, the first in her exciting children’s adventure series—Chronicles of the Stone. A 5,000-year-old mystery comes to life when a scruffy peddler gives Adam and Justin Sinclair an old Egyptian scarab on their very first day in Egypt. Justin and Adam embark upon the adventure of a lifetime, taking them down the Nile and across the harsh desert in their search for the legendary tomb of the Scarab King, an ancient Egyptian ruler. They are plunged into a whirlpool of hazardous and mysterious events, pursued by enemies in their quest to solve the secret of the sacred scarab. With just their wits, courage, and each other, the boys manage to survive … only to find that the end of one journey is the beginning of another! Young explorers will enjoy an interactive journey through Egypt, following Justin and Adam’s exciting adventure on www.secretofthesacredscarab.com.
Readers can also browse the first chapter of the book. Those who survive the journey and manage to translate the Curse of Thoth will be able to read the first chapter in Adam and Justin’s next adventure—The Search for the Stone of Excalibur—as they hunt for the Scroll of the Ancients.
T-shirts, mugs, and Stones of Power are available as well. Readers can purchase The Secret of the Sacred Scarab on Amazon.com, B&B.com or Barnes & Noble Bookstores, as well as many online stores. Find out more about Fiona on www.FionaIngram.com.
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Book Review of Patriot Acts
I hardly ever read fiction, but bringing fiction into reality is what Steven Clark Bradley has accomplished in his Patriot Acts. I like the impossible as well as the adventure. It is a fast and exciting read as well as historical and educational. Steven has hit the nail on the head with everything going on today in the world of terrorism. He explains in his own feelings and beliefs the way our President has tried to protect this great country of ours against the murderess scoundrels who kill and have no value of life. It is very creative how Steven put Fisher and Hamilton into a frame that shows the love and devotion the two men have for each other in the face of death, and how they manage to survive.
Patriot Acts gave me an education I never had, and I understood the message and the details about what our country and its people can expect, from terrorism. The educational part of Patriot Acts is a warning and gives us the knowledge to prepare for the worst. There will be different viewpoints of this great read, but in the end we all stand together in our fight against terrorism in our great country. Steven, I got an education in terrorism, thanks to Steven and Patriot Acts, I can prepare my family for its future.
Tony (Tony Nap) Napoli
Author of My Father, My Don
For more information about this book, see Steven’s blog.
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Dawn Menge’s book, Queen Vernita’s Visitors, made the finalist list for the EVVY award! The book is also one of the three semi-finalists in the 2008 literary awards for Reader Reviews. See the book video or listen to this author’s interview with Sarah Moore on WITS Podcast.
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On the Letters from 2030 series, my book ZERO Greenhouse Emissions - The Day the Lights Went Out - Our Future World is non-fiction. It contains many facts that the general public doesn’t know or understand about finite resource depletion and climate change. It was written to alert the general public to these issues and written in plain language that is easy to understand. It simplifies the science and I believe inspires the reader to become involved in being part of a solution to the many urgent challenges we face.
Trouble is if you haven’t got a person’s attention (with many issues facing people today ; economic, jobs, U.S. recession, etc) you haven’t got the audience. How the Letters from 2030 came about was to use many of the facts about now and the immediate future, but to fictionalize it as how it will be in 2030. By then, and I won’t scare you with the details here, the world will be well past the point of no return and we will leave a legacy of our present actions for those who come after us to deal with. They won’t find it very pleasant.
So what I’m looking to do is to connect with writers who wish to become involved with the ongoing series Letters from 2030. It can be viewed at http://lettersfrom2030.blogspot.com. Along with a number of other contributors, I see those wishing to be involved fictionally positioning themselves as a character in a location in 2030 that still supports population / outposts. Have a look at the blog and read the initial post first. It is proposed that the blog will become both a book and submission for a TV series.
Interested writers should write a letter as a fictional character and email it to me. I’ll slip in some facts if appropriate then post it to the blog as if it were happening in 2030.
Bob Williamson,
Founder & Chair Greenhouse Neutral Foundation
www.greenhouseneutral.net
The Dream Quest One Poetry & Writing Contest is open to anyone who loves expressing innermost thoughts and feelings into the beautiful art of poetry or to write a short story that is worth telling everyone! And to all who have the ability to dream. Write a poem or short story for a chance to win cash prizes. All works must be original. http://www.dreamquestone.com
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